获满分 怎样的英语能力才能写好实效性 新闻性 趣味性 大考英语实战文

　　获满分 怎样的英语能力才能写好实效性 新闻性 趣味性 大考英语实战文

　　作者:作者英语写作范文

　　作者/编辑/刘宝彩/天津

　　应试教育毕业生具备怎样的英语能力才能成功写作出即时性的英语作文，这是英语老师及其毕业生值得思考的一个课题。下面就“2023年7月 29和30日396列车因水害路基有两处塌方而被迫长时间停车，乘务员赵阳及其同事耿毅的事迹”用英语写英语作文，作一报道如下：

　　“Employees with China’s railway takes people's life and safety as the first-order priority, keeping in mind a greatly excellent service to offer to all of you”Ms. ZHAO Yang one of the train attendants spoke in a choked voice to passengers,“Getting off the train, I saw two lands sliding downward, which I feel so much in fear.”she added“I together with my fellows walk for 700- or 800-meter distance, to bring something basical to eat, that is made available for you all of passengers.”she also says repeatedly.

　　“Big crowd is expected not to be collected here at the small dinning room, without appearing at risk in any case. About his, do you hear clearly?”, lastly she said“I as one of ladies as having been considered as a child from one Chinese family have become one of rail-way attendants to put on uniforms. This makes me, together with GENG Yi, my colleague, worthy of all of you who will be provided with free-of-charge meal cooked for you as quickly as possibly.”

　　The above story really gets me reporter touched by Ms. ZHAO Yang’s speaking repeatedly to passengers while she gave them food one by one orderly. That means her action makes her respected by all, especially at this time when heavy rainfall to cause flood hit Mentougou place, Beijing, where the passenger’s train had to stop on the way.

　　The rainfall, lasting for near 2-day time, hit Beijing on July 29 and 30, 2023 so much heavily that passenger train No. K396 had to be forced to stop for long-time at mid-way place called Mentougou near Beijing to result from two bed-road collapses. Reportedly, these passengers staying in the passenger’ s train carriage have already moved to a safe place.

　　As shown in the above, Ms. ZHAO Yang one of train attendants together with her colleague takes overall on responsibility for passengers’ safety to be ensured during their stay in the train.

　　这篇英语作文报道文章大意如下：

　　“咱们铁路一直秉承人民至上，生命至上，服务人民。”赵阳哽咽地对旅客说“我刚才下去的时候特别有感触，有两处塌方，”她接着说，“我们走了七八百米，把这些东西给大家运回来,”她也反复地说道“请大家千万不要拥挤，千万不要拥挤在小餐厅这里，不要发生任何危险，听到没有？”她最后说道：“我是一个女人，也是别人家的孩子。我就是因为穿了这身制服，我和我的同事耿毅得对得起大家；免费的饭，一会儿做好就给大家”

　　这个真实的故事之所以令人感动不已，是因为在赵阳及其同事有序发放食品反复说的那些话。特别是在旅客列车中途停滞在北京门头沟下大暴雨严重的水灾区域，她和同事耿毅的行为更是受到大家的尊敬。

　　暴雨，由于持续近两天，即，2023年7月 29和30日而引起的水灾发生在北京门头沟特别严重，导致途经北京门头沟的K396列车因水害路基有两处塌方，而被迫长时间停车。因此赵阳和同事完全承担起确保旅客在列车滞留期间安全的责任。据了解，受阻旅客已安全转移。

　　总结：

　　这篇英语作文实际上就是大考英语写作的文章，其手法是：运用了用英语逻辑思维写作法，不但帮助“内容+逻辑+语法”三位一体紧密地结合成为一个整体，而且还解决单选、完型及“准确搞定长难句、阅读和写作”的问题。学生还能大大地改善整体上的逻辑思维的清晰性，提高英语作文实际“应战”能力。彻底解决了——获满分！具有怎样的英语能力才能写好实效性、新闻性、趣味性的大考英语实战文——之问题了。对此考生学生如有需求则留言私信我助你一臂之力。